I have some "incomplete" version of this track (length is 5:45) and I prefer it to this. This one has the "main" sound maybe a bit too detuned. Also, this is too long. ...Actually, I am starting to get used to the detuned sound as I listen more times. 8-P

Anyways, I mostly like the track. The sounds are not very professional of course but I like these strange unique melodies.

This somehow resembles my own music. I like to compare your achievements to mine, as I am pretty much at the same level at making music. (You can check my project name "C55" :-) )